Do you agree that fake news is a serious problem?
I think that fake news is a very serious problem because it influences our lives in few ways. As we know all people are different, some are more naive than others, they believe in stuff that may not be real causing people around them to believe it as well. Now, the problem is that not always this fake news is about celebrities sometimes, like for example now when informations about coronavirus are all around us, it may have a lot bigger aftershock. I think that in extream situations it may even be threat to someones life, that's why we should do everything in our power to get rid of most of it.
You have to work on your style. This sounds as if you were SAYING it, and not like a written paragraph. For example, this shouldn't be one sentence: "Now, the problem is that not always this fake news is about celebrities sometimes, like for example now when information about coronavirus are all around us, it may have a lot bigger aftershock. "
OdpowiedzUsuń"Now, " is a speech marker in ... speech, not in writing.
Also, watch your spelling, e.g. what is EXTREAM?